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The Heavenly Bodies of Talmenor

I finally got around to fleshing out my notes on this. Contrary to default belief, Talmenor has more than one moon!

The Heavenly Bodies of Talmenor
Talmenor is about the size of Earth. It orbits one sun, and has six major moons. Four other planets are visible to the naked eye and hence known to scholars and magi. Unless stated otherwise, these planets and moons have atmospheres suitable for humans, but are rarely traveled to.

The Moons
Ra, the First Daughter
Astrology: Moon
Just like Earth’s moon. A shard of the first sun goddess, kept by Talmenor as a keepsake.

Re, the Second Son
Astrology: Mercury
(The First Son is the actual sun.) Technically an orbiting comet, usually appears as a large white tail or smear that crosses the sky. Believed to have been crafted for Merrana as a courtship gift by Suorr’Lun, and now Merrana’s Sphere. Mostly non-solid surface with no breathable air.

G’brorr, the Water Moon, or Sphere of Water
Astrology: Venus
Water/ocean planet, often seen in the sky as a gibbous moon, colored blue. Somewhat larger than Ra. Believed to be Jarilon’s Sphere.

Mauloth, the Blood Moon
Astrology: Mars
A red desert moon, bigger than Ra by half. Believed to be the site of a battle between gods in the mythic era, now a no man’s land. Though now an inhospitable atmosphere, it was once inhabited and known for its light gravity, allowing warriors to “super-jump” across its surface. Its orbit is uneven, usually appearing as a crescent, and the rare times it appears to be full are correlated with deathly prophecies.

Khanaan, Sphere of Life
Astrology: Jupiter
Green and yellow moon that is home to teeming jungles and tall-grass plains. Lunaria’s Sphere. Its phases and size roughly match Ra’s; some prophecies are tied to when these moons are both full, both new, or one of each.

Tyr, the Sentinel Moon
Astrology: Saturn
A yellow desert moon, a third of Ra’s size. Atmosphere is barely hospitable – humans would tire easily and feel lighter, as if uplifted by a divine presence. Carro’s Sphere. Is almost always full.

The Planets
Gehelnom, Sphere of Damnation
Closest to the sun, tidally locked so that one side is always facing the sun. This sun-side is a fiery hellscape, while the other is dark and cold. Only some places have atmospheres habitable for humans, kept so by demonic magic, for the Gehelians’ slaves and visitors. A little bigger than Earth. Usually casts a yellow light in the night sky.

Caramyr, Sphere of Fire
Second closest to the sun, a planet of volcanoes, black rocky steppes, and mudflats. Casts a red light. Mistakenly believed to be Sirillon’s home Sphere, it is also named for being the site of one of Carro’s many trials. Slightly smaller than Earth.

Naias, Sphere of Air
A gas giant, second to furthest out from the sun. Casts a blue-white light. The upper layers are breathable, though creatures that fall too far are dragged into the core and crushed by atmospheric pressure. Much larger than Earth.

Reszia, the Second Daughter, the Obelisk
A hollowed out asteroid that orbits farthest out of the known planets. Has a Saturn-like ring of attending spirits. Once the workshop of Shen-Bahan, now imprisons Althrasia. Earth could just barely fit inside. Barely visible as a small violet pinprick.

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Axes and Lightning: FULL

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Playing With Architecture

Art stream time! In this one I played with a new way of doing architecture and its shading, stumbling my way through new tools as I did so. This would probably work better in a vector program where I can make the shapes perfectly clean. Not an art I'll keep, but a learning experience.

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Concept Sketching: Three Comics

I'm having a very productive week!

Here's the sketching phase, perhaps the most fun of the art phases aside from coloring in plate armor. Since each of these weas only about 5 minutes long, I combined them into one video.

Three World of Warcraft comics! Titles will probably be, oh, I dunno...Exception!, Siqsa's Eulogy, and Three Cloth Boots (Socks).

If you're interested in seeing the completed comics, as well as an explanation for how I got started on these, check out my blog!
https://www.foxfirefiction.com/series/comic-resurgence/
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The Nameless Accounts: The Prison Camps (16)

The akor’mar occupation of Sun-On-The-Lake was not a certain thing by any means. On the outside, it appeared as if Sun-On-The-Lake had always been an akor’mar city, for all the wuyon’mari you saw out in the open. The akor’mari sung and celebrated and began to build up rudimentary dwellings for themselves -- and for their prisoners – as if it was nothing more exciting than carving out a new market cavern back in Vuzsdin.

Yet in the alleyways and abandoned corners of the city, there was still danger. We may have occupied the main roads and the Palace, but the rest was free-for-all. At night we were safe enough; we could see in the dark better than the wuyon’mari, and they knew it. During the day, though, where the sun stung our eyes, they came out to harass us. There were ambushes and raids and assassinations. Daily we were warned by our officers about places still held by the wuyon’mari, where they had taken pains to dig out the cobblestones and plant pitfalls or other kinds of traps. The ...

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The Nameless Accounts: The Love of an Akor'mar (15)

The next few weeks — or was it months? — after the fall of Sun-On-The-Lake was a blur to me. The akor’mari set up shop within the city itself, repairing some of the buildings and walls, making them battle-ready. I don't know if they planned on living in the city once it was cleaned out, or if it was simply to be a temporary headquarters for the rest of our operations in Nah’Ke’tzin. They acted as if they expected retaliation.

The rest of the army was housed in tents, set up wherever there was space for them. I slept in Sus'syri’s tent during the days, half because that's how cramped the available lodging was, and half because... I felt different somehow. And somehow, she could understand.

For as long as I can remember, I’ve been the sort to be in the middle of attention. I talked lots, laughed lots, told stories. I had many friends -- or at least people I would speak with regularly; I know the word does not mean the same thing in your language. Still, I enjoyed their presence and would...

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The Nameless Accounts: The Fall of Sun-On-The-Lake (14)

Some of the army's excitement waned as we stumbled our way through the twisting forest paths of Lesser Nah’Ke’tzin: now tame Surfacer forests of beech and oak. Scouts like myself had chosen a path that took us in a circuitous route around Rising Heath, and we could let our guard down for the first time since we had come in from the ships. We marched in single file along deer trails, stepping in each others’ footsteps, moving only like the akor’mari can with complete silence, as if we were all playing Stalk-the-Nekru in the close tunnels of our homeland. I wondered then if we had only been taught those games to prepare us for something like this, not just our own childish amusement.

Our nerves and the excitement came back all at once when we finally found ourselves up on the gray cliffs overlooking Sun-On-The-Lake. It was just past dawn, and we could see the waters of the city’s namesake, Lake Ta’hiki, through the mist.

I have been to that city in the years since the war, and it is now not ...

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Text Adventure: Carpe Diem

Here at FoxFireFiction, we are proud to unveil our latest product: Text Adventures! Choose your way and become a Talmenor hero... or villain! The choice is yours, starting with the TA "Carpe Diem", a tale spun by Hristjian Pavlovski.

https://www.foxfirefiction.com/2023/06/16/carpe-diem/

"Hottest Day" now available on our website!

It has been a busy couple months! In response to unexpected delays on the print publishing side, our first FoxFireFiction novel is now available through our website! Read the Prologue now for FREE, with the rest available through FFF's subscription service!

(For our Locals folks! With the release of Locals.com Articles functionality we are also looking into releasing the full novel here, hopefully within the next couple weeks.)

https://www.foxfirefiction.com/2023/06/15/the-hottest-day-of-the-year/

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